Care Santos, Diamant blau (Barcelona: Columna, 2016). 433 pages.
Researching your family history is a hugely popular hobby in
Australia. Most descendants of European settlers can only look back at a
200-year-old history in Australia, and some (or, rather, very few) are able to precisely
retrace their origins beyond the local records to European roots. Whether our
ancestors remain somehow present in us or not is certainly debatable; yet writing
about them certainly amounts to remembering something that may have not
occurred at all.
Creating a family saga out of one’s own family is a risky
literary proposition, and Care Santos gets away with it in Diamant blau. But only just. The family are the Pujolars (the
patriarch drops the ‘r’ from the name after he decides to move the family from
Olot to Mataró). The story spans two centuries, from the early 1700s to the
decade just before the outbreak of the Spanish Civil War. The narrative is at
times somewhat chaotic rather than fragmentary, as it takes leaps forwards and
backwards through time without much of an obvious order to it.
This old church in Olot has seen more history than you and me... Source: Wikicommons |
It is 1853 and Silvestre Pujolar is leading a less than peaceful
existence in Olot, where he runs a textile dyeing business. The Carlist wars
force his hand and resolve; he packs everything of value in a horse-drawn cart
and sets course for Mataró, close to the textile factories and the growing
metropolis that is the capital of Catalonia. He has a good eye for business, a
convincing tone of voice and the manners that create friends rather than
enemies. In just a few years he will become a well-off, respected gentleman.
Pity that his son Florià is not endowed with the same shrewdness and talent.
Over the decades, the family’s fortunes change from success
to ruin. Not even the First World War was to be sufficient for Florià to make
the dyeing business flourish. Some of the decisions he makes soon after his
father’s demise are plain dumb – the biggest mistake being asking for
Margarida’s hand in marriage. They have four children, three girls and a boy,
Josep, a pusillanimous prat who cannot stand the pestilent stenches of the
business. The eldest is Teresa (the author’s grandmother), who is by far the
most charismatic character in the whole book.
Teresa has been betrothed to a … how can we put it? An
idiot? Someone who spends his days and nights studying in order to try and pass
the examinations that will make a notary public of him. Allow me at this point
to stray off the topic a little and remark that the incompetent PM currently in
charge of the central Spanish government used to “work” as a notary public.
These “professionals” enjoy some “special reputation” in Spain. Just ask anyone
who has gone through the ordeal of trying to get an inheritance.
The market at Plaça de Cuba in Mataró is frequently mentioned in Diamant blau. Source: wikicommons |
But let’s go back to the literature. I will not deny there
is some in the novel, but it rarely reaches the heights of that which constitutes
‘high literature’. It seems to me that Care Santos throws all caution to the
wind and chooses to tell a story rather than a history. In other words, Santos
eliminates the possibility of creating a great work of literature right from
the beginning, choosing the path of plain, simple storytelling. Which is fine
as well, of course, but makes the book appear curtailed in its scope and generally
underwhelming.
Two aspects need to be mentioned in this regard. First, the
poorly finished portrayal of some characters, who seem to merely appear for the
purposes of pushing on with the plot. For a novel with so many leaps forward
and flashbacks into the 18th and 19th centuries and such
a long cast of characters, it is regrettable that some of them come across as
mere fillers. I daresay this is due to the author’s obstinate eagerness to
construct a story out of a few historical facts.
Secondly, there is at times a palpably condescending tone
towards the reader. This is most evident when the novel creates a parenthesis
in the narrative by presenting a cul-de-sac stub in the plotline (a rather
superfluous one, if not outright annoying). For example, the brief chapter
devoted to William Perkin, the discoverer of mauveine, the first synthetic
organic chemical dye, which concludes in this fashion: “And this was, my dear
friends, my modest contribution to the story. I hope I did not commit the sin
of boring you. I wish you all a very colourful life.” (p. 370, my translation).
Oh my, 😬.
As in any family story, many are the themes that are central
to the narrative: there is a family curse embodied in a grandfather clock; there
is melodrama around marriages, unrequited love and illegitimate children; there
is the hard fall from affluence and the despair poverty brings about; and there
is the bravery of the women who defied social taboos and conventions in the
early 20th century.
Do all these themes, subplots and gratuitous trimmings add
to a great work of literature? Let other readers decide. For my part, I have
made up my mind about the Diamant blau:
the title refers to a feathered automaton kept in the birdcage the Pujolàs have
in their back yard.
Set the bird free, I say.
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